My toast was terrible this morning. All the more so
because I’m the one responsible for making it.
I’ve raved before about England’s toast; as far as I’m
concerned the people of Great Britain seem to have perfected the art of
toasting bread. I found most of England’s cuisine to be scrumptious actually…some
people might think that odd but I’m from Seattle where we seem to have a
passion for breakfast food, pub food, and beer, three things England does
better than most. Every culture has its specialties after all.
On the other hand, the consistently worst country for
breakfast (in my opinion) was Italy. I’m not sure Italians actually eat
“breakfast;” it may just be something they whip together for the tourists. I
will never forget staying at an (otherwise) very nice “bed & breakfast” in
Venice and being served “toast” that was packaged in a stamped cellophane
pouch, similar to freeze-dried astronaut food. I kid thee not.
My toast this morning was very much like that Venician
toast…in both consistency and flavor. And mine, I know, started out as bread.
That is a verifiable fact. Truly terrible.
But fortunately (and this is the reason I bring it up), I
was serving said toast ONLY to myself. Terrible as it was, I was the only
person experiencing it…I wasn’t serving it up to anyone or forcing it down
someone’s throat. It was MY bad breakfast, and I chose to eat it (‘cause I was
pressed for time and it was what I had and I’m really trying not to waste food
these days) and that was my “little piece o suffering.” But I wasn’t buttering
it up for the masses and trying to call it gourmet or something.
Yesterday, I did something I almost never ever do: I paid
money for a book at Barnes & Noble that wasn’t actually in stock; a book
that will actually have to be mailed to me because it’s print-on-demand. And I
did that because after being off work since last Wednesday, I spent the first
half of my work day reading the book’s first hundred pages on-line (for free)
instead of getting to my backlog…and if I’d had the entire book available, I
probably wouldn’t have gotten ANYthing done yesterday. The book in question?
Just fascinating, fascinating reading. It’s something
I’ve been interested in reading since I heard about it a year or two ago (it
was on last year’s Christmas list but I didn’t get it), and I finally had a
chance to read some excerpts from Kaminski’s web site. Love it…I’m into
histories/biographies, especially those of struggling artists/writers (as Lucas
once was), I love “behind-the-scenes” insights and info (“the dirt”) on
subjects that already have known or accepted histories. I enjoy seeing the
human side of larger-than-life icons. And, of course, I am a pretty big Star
Wars fanatic.
I was reading back through my Star Wars posts on this
blog, and I was surprised to find ‘em some of my better posts. Now I may well
be biased, but I did think they were a bit different and surprisingly
insightful (or at least “interesting”)…at least, compared to what my memory
remembered them being. But what I really liked was the (mostly) consistent
thread running through them: an appreciation for the films as entertainment,
for Lucas as a filmmaker, and for the EU (“expanded universe”) as a creative
effort…and a dissatisfaction with pandering and pastiche, even in Lucas’s own
work. My feelings on these things
haven’t changed, and may have even been emphasized by what I’ve read so far in
Kaminski’s book. But, man…I’m kind of fed up with “ret-conned” history. I’m
kind of bugged by disingenuousness (wow, spell-check is saying that’s a word!).
Now I get it…really, I get it. The whole thing is
complicated. The push-and-pull of fame and fortune and legacy and insecurity
and people telling you you’re a genius and finding you ARE a genius and
allowing a little creative embellishment here and there get out of hand, plus
giving your fans what they want, plus being a filmmaker and needing to ply the
filmmaker’s trade (including edits of one’s baby) and then trying to find a
cohesive filmmaker’s way of putting those cutting room scraps back into
theaters in a different fashion…I GET IT. Really. The fact is: the truth is
(often) complicated. Or rather, the truth isn’t complicated but the WHOLE
truth, understanding it all, is a lot more complicated than the meat, or rather
the KERNEL of the truth.
Which is part of why I find Kaminski’s book such a
must-read…I personally am fascinated with the “complication” AND I want to know
what the kernel of the “truth” is. For those not interested in reading it
themselves, I’ll provide the Cliff Notes version:
The Truth: George Lucas wanted to make a Flash Gordon
movie the same way, say, that I want to write a Star Wars RPG. It’s not what he
dreamed about doing as a child (when he wanted, perhaps, to be a race car
driver), but a bunch of stuff combined to lead him to setting that goal.
The Complicated Truth (Cliff Notes): While one can argue
the success or failure of his goal (i.e. “The Truth”), his work (or should I
say his Work) morphed into something that transcended anything even Lucas could
have imagined, and he has both “rolled with it,” profited by it, and attempted
to manage and direct it (with varying degrees of success) ever since. And I’m
not just talking about the “post-first-trilogy” or even “post-first-film”
expansion of the Star Wars universe/franchise/mythology/legacy. I’m talking
about even before PRE-production of the first film, the thing (his original
goal) started morphing…and has snowballed (my, has it snowballed!) ever since.
Crazy.
Anyway, the really interesting thing (well, actually, I
find it all “really interesting” but the really, REALLY interesting thing) for
me is the earliest drafts of his space film treatments, which I find at least
as compelling as the story he eventually told, if not more compelling. Oh, I’m
not talking about the “space version” of Kurosawa’s The Hidden Fortress, I’m
talking about “The Journal of the Whills” (actually sounds like a pretty good
book) and the second and/or third treatments of “The Star Wars.”
I should probably explain (at this point, finally) my
whole reason for once again having Star Wars on the brain. My son, my
20-month-old toddler has discovered Star Wars…and loves it. Now, it would be
truly disingenuous of me to declare I’m a “terrible” father; I know I’m pretty
loving and attentive, with a fair amount of sternness that leads my child to be
both A) happy most of the time, and B) well behaved (in public and private)
most of the time. And by most of the time, I mean around 98%...he really is a
jewel of a kid. But recently, it seems like more than half of his vocabulary
seems to consist of “Seahawks,” “touchdown,” and “boom” or else Star Wars
references…with the SW words definitely having the upper hand the last couple
weeks. And this leads me to think I may be doing bad, bad things to my boy’s
childhood development process.
The fact that he can perfectly mimic Darth Vader’s breathing
on command, despite lacking the ability to pronounce the character’s name (he
calls him “DuVo”) is both entertaining and somewhat disturbing.
So there’s been a lot of Star Wars in my house lately. A
lot of books and comics, a lot of scene watching, a lot of jawa requests. And
being inundated with even more Star Wars than usual (which really is saying
something), is making me revisit my earlier introspections on the subject, not
to mention confront (once again) the shortfalls and mental hurdles of my own
“little space thing” (to use Lucas’s phrase)…i.e. my space opera RPG.
Last Thursday I was really excited to get out to my
Thursday night game session and try another play-test session with my space
opera RPG. Unfortunately, I got sick Thursday morning and was worse by the
evening and wasn’t able to get out. THIS week, the dilemma’s a little
different: I’m in perfect health, but the Seattle Seahawks are playing the San
Francisco 49ers for control of the division and 5:20pm (PST). I mean…what the
hell am I supposed to do with THAT? Despite being an underdog, Seattle has a
real opportunity to punch the 49ers in the mouth the same as the Giants did on
Sunday…and I’d hate to miss that.
[for whatever reason, I’ve really grown to loathe Frisco
over the last few years. They seem to now occupy that special bile duct that
used to be reserved for the Denver Broncos and John Elway back when the
Seahawks were in the AFC West. It’s not just that I want to see the ‘Hawks at
the top of the heap every year; I want to see them stomp the Niners on the way
there. Last season’s double-loss to San Fran really hurt the ol’ pride]
…an entire year after he finished his first treatment,
Lucas emerged with a rough draft screenplay. It was called “The Star Wars” and
was dated May 1974…Jan Helander summarized the rough draft:
Kane Starkiller, a Jedi-Bendu master, is in hiding on the
Fourth Moon of Utapau with his two sons Annikin and Deak, when a Sith warrior
finds them and Deak is killed. The surviving Starkillers head to the Aquilae
system, where they are met by Kane’s old Jedi friend, General Luke Skywalker.
Kane, whose war-battered body is a concoction of artificial limbs, knows that
he is dying, and persuades Luke to become Annikin’s Jedi teacher. He then
travels to the city of Gordon, leaving his son with Skywalker and the King of
Aquilae. Clieg Whitsun, a rebel spy on the emperor’s planet of Alderaan, has
learned that an Imperial fleet, led by General Darth Vader and Governor Crispin
Hoedaack, is about to conquer Aquilae with a “death star” space fortress. Rebel
fighters are sent out to stop the attack, but the Aquilaen king is killed, and
instead of Princess Leia (the rightful heir), a corrupt senator takes over,
surrendering the planet to the Empire.
Annikin, Luke, and Whitsum, joined by Artwo Detwo and See
Threepio (two bickering robots who have escaped from the space fortress), bring
Leia and her two younger brothers to the spaceport at Gordon, from where they
can reach safety. After a fight at a cantina, where Skywalker uses his “lasersword”
to kill his antagonists, the group meet up with Kane and his alien friend Han
Solo who have arranged transport to a friendly planet. They need a power unit
for suspended animation in order to get past Imperial scanners, and Kane
heroically rips one from his body, causing his death. After avoiding a trap set
by Vader and Prince Valorum (the black Knight of the Sith), the rebels are
pursued into space, where the arguing Leia and Annikin realize that they love
each other. Their craft is damaged in an asteroid field and Whitsum dies as it
explodes, but the others abandon ship in time and land on the jungle planet of
Yavin, where Leia is captured by alien trappers. Annikin tries to rescue her,
but only succeeds in freeing five “Wookees” (huge, grey and furry beasts), and
Leia eventually ends up in the hands of the Empire.
After a tip from two anthropologists, the rebels and the
Wookee tribe (including Prince Chewbacca) attack an Imperial outpost, and a
forest chase ensues. When he learns that Leia is held captive aboard the space
fortress, General Skywalker starts traiing Wookees to fly fighter ships in
order to conquer the death star. Annikin is skeptical of the plan and gets onto
the fortress (together with Artwo) on a mission of his own, dressed as an Imperial
“skyraider,” but he is soon captured and tortured by General Vader. Valorum
sees this and realizes that the Imperials are completely without honor and
codes, and that he has more in common with the young Jedi than with the
emperor. Turning his back on the Empire, he frees both Annikin and Leia, and
they escape down a garbage chute. After almost being crushed in the garbage
receptacle, Valorum, Leia, Annikin, and Artwo manage to abandon the station
just before the Wookee destroy it, killing both Vader and Governor Hoedaack.
Back in her throne room, Queen Leia honours the heroes (including Valorum), and
Annikin is appointed new Lord Protector of Aquilae.
Now as Kaminski points out A) this is the script Lucas
refers to in his later interviews as being too big for a single movie requiring
a paring down until he could later afford to make sequels containing “the whole
story,” yet B) the story included in this draft is little more than a larger,
“extended version” of the original (first) Star Wars movie. Certain characters
are combined, names are changed around, and certain scenes/sequences are
recycled into later movies (like the “asteroid belt/love scene” in Empire or
the “forest world capture/buddying up with native creatures” in RotJ). Lucas’s
later declaration that his ability to make the “rest of the movie” meant an
ability to continue a saga that included all that “stuff” he left on the
cutting room floor in his need to create a FILM…"films" being stories told with
pictures that have to follow certain parameters due to the restrictions
imposed by the medium.
What Lucas had PRIOR to his (most consider) masterful final draft is a
rambling, rollicking Sci-Fi adventure film, almost like a conglomeration of a
serial matinee (c.f. Flash Gordon). Film gave Lucas the big budget to do the
kind of F/X epic he wanted, but not the SCOPE he wanted. And while the clamor
for “more” gave him the latitude to glom onto the scope (through a serial,
sequel format…see The Lord of the Rings films), the medium STILL constrained
him to a degree. There is SOME “cliffhanger” to the end of The Empire Strikes
Back, but there is some denouement as well. It still has a beginning, middle,
an end, it still has most of its plot points wrapped-up, it is still
“self-contained.”
HOWEVER, I am not a film maker. I am (marginally) a
“game designer” interested in long-term game play that includes character
development over time and game play, and for me the “rambling serial format” is
what I want. I don’t want or need “self-contained stories” because I’m not working
in a film medium and (in my experience) that’s not how RPG sessions generally
unfold…at least, not without very specific ("Story Now") rules sets, or a lot of
heavy-handed GM force. Neither of which I like to use (because self-contained
stories aren’t all that important to me when role-playing).
Consequently, I find these kinds of rambling,
“schlock-inspired” treatments to be incredibly inspiring for my purposes. The
quote above leaves out a lot of other “intriguing differences” in Lucas’s
original story from the final film (said differences being described in Kaminski's book) including the competing Jedi and Sith
groups (basically, two orders of rival warriors, more honor-driven a la samurai than
driven by the mystic morality of Light and Dark side). Which is why, of course,
I ordered the book…I want MORE of this stuff. To me, the mind of George Lucas
is a fertile gold mine of Sci-Fi fantasy; if he falls down at all, it’s in
trying to put it into some sort of rational, thoughtful format instead of just
going with the gonzo wa-hoo.
Well, and also in trying to ret-con his own history, a victim
of his own success. That’s just trying to serve us “toast” in a vacuum-sealed
bag. That’s not toast, man.