AD&D adventure seven to nine PCs of levels 5th-7th
I am reviewing these in the order they were submitted. For my review criteria, please check out this post. All reviews will (probably) contain *SPOILERS*; you have been warned! Because these are short (two page) adventures, it is my intention to keep the reviews brief.
The TL;DR: an ambitious adventure site that’s a bit of a mess.
The first submission by a new author (i.e. one who didn’t participate in last year’s ASC), Seb creates a bona fide adventure site in the form of a Buddhist temple in abox canyon currently housing a group of bandits.
Written for AD&D (with a definite Oriental Adventures feel) the thing, for me, falls apart due to the scope it sets for itself: Seb creates an entire setting-derived situation concerning a rogue Imperial general-turned-bandit who provides an objective of either justice or straightforward robbing of his hoard.
Likewise, the temple itself is good (i.e well-imagined and well-themed by the author) as is the treasure hoard: appropriate both for the site of the theme, and for the expected level range.
But the adventure lacks challenge. There are only a handful of the bandits on hand (plus a chained-up hill giant) and the remaining 150 bandits and leaders of the bandit camp (including the aforementioned General and his magic-using henchmen) are left un-detailed “due to space considerations.” Despite the fact they are key to the order of battle presented in the write-up.
Sorry..this one is lacking and needs a LOT of work to make it playable. Telling the DM to just “use page 66 of the Monster Manual to generate” the appropriate opponents is NOT acceptable for a module.
Two stars (**). However, you get a “+” for having a decent concept and good amount of treasure.
It was a bit naive of me to think I could edit this down to fit the contest parameters, but I enjoyed the process of writing it up.
ReplyDeleteBut it’s nice to see you saw something decent in there.
Will do better.
Thanks for taking the time to read through it and happy new year to you and yours!
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DeleteIt's a nice little piece, and the basic kernel is great for an "adventure site;" it's just all the "extra" that makes it bigger than it needs to be for purposes of this contest.
I dig on the OA vibe, by the way. Looks like a great campaign piece/situation.